Thursday, August 30, 2007

You Take My Breath

My heart flutters,
My knees get weak,
As he passes, I can not speak.
And I dare not,
My thoughts are too jumbled,
And he takes my breath away.

Who cares about breathing?
I'd hold my breath forever if it meant he'll never leave.
I turn blue,
Heaving,
He makes me live,
So for him I'd stop breathing.

I haven't fallen in love.
I built my life around it.
Surrounded,
I thank heavens, I found it.
Bounded,
Tied and gagged.

PLEASE,
Do not release me!
You complete me in my eyes.
Where ever you are,
My heart shall lie.
I'd stop breathing, for you my love,
For you my love, I would die.




2 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey t...i love this one...y cuz it causes me to evaluate if what I have is like wat u describe...does he take my breath...wud i hold my breath till he turns blue jus so he cud b around me...deep stuff man...keep it up grlie!~*~LaYdEe P~*~

Shorty said...

Thank Laydee P...don't go holdin ur breath tho. Ya feel sometimes that u love the person that much but I'm still waitin it out 2 kno if it is eva that real.